Hi Shazana. I am Sinead at Paroa school. I read your ANZAC day homework and I really liked it because you must of put a lot of time into it but one thing that I think you need to work on is capitals. Whenever you wrote the word "I", you didn't make it a capital. To visit my blog, go to http://paroagreysineadf.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Sinead, thanks for your feedback I will work on my capitals and full stops and also will go to your wonderful blog to check out what amazing work you have done
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Hi Shazana.
ReplyDeleteI am Sinead at Paroa school. I read your ANZAC day homework and I really liked it because you must of put a lot of time into it but one thing that I think you need to work on is capitals. Whenever you wrote the word "I", you didn't make it a capital. To visit my blog, go to http://paroagreysineadf.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Sinead,
Deletethanks for your feedback I will work on my capitals and full stops and also will go to your wonderful blog to check out what amazing work you have done