Kia Ora, Shazana I'm sure you know who I am, but I would like to say that i really like your presentation the writing is very easy to read and the background looks great, I do have to say that their were a few minor mistakes but nothing major and a few sentences don't make sense but overall you have made a very good slide.
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Kia Ora, Shazana
ReplyDeleteI'm sure you know who I am, but I would like to say that i really like your presentation the writing is very easy to read and the background looks great, I do have to say that their were a few minor mistakes but nothing major and a few sentences don't make sense but overall you have made a very good slide.
Yours Sincerely
Jordyn
Kia Ora, Shazana
ReplyDeleteI thought that this was a great peice of work,
and just like jordyn said the writing was very easy to read and liked it
keep it up!!
Athena
(class mate)